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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

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Although Sergen acted like a loyal member of his adopted family, truthfully he hated the Hulmasters and wanted vengeance for his father, Kamoth Kastelmar, a minor noble from Hillsfar who had married Grigor’s sister but had been driven out of Hulburg years earlier after a failed attempt to seize power.
  

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Although Sergen acted like a loyal member of his adopted family, in truth he hated the Hulmasters and wanted vengeance for his father, Kamoth Kastelmar, a minor noble from Hillsfar who had married Grigor’s sister but had been driven out of Hulburg years earlier for a failed attempt to seize power.

  • Although Sergen acted like a loyal member of his adopted family, in truth he hated the Hulmasters and wanted vengeance for his father, Kamoth Kastelmar, a minor noble from Hillsfar who had married Grigor’s sister but had been driven out of Hulburg years earlier for a failed attempt to seize power.
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Although Sergen acted like a loyal member of his adopted family, in truth he hated the Hulmasters and wanted vengeance for his father, Kamoth Kastelmar, a minor noble from Hillsfar who had married Grigor’s sister but had been driven out of Hulburg years earlier for a failed attempt to seize power.

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