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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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In 1344 DR, when Dorn was nine, he and his parents were sent as part of a merchant caravan traveling to Yulash; however, during the journey, the party was attacked by a red dragon.
  

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In 1344 DR, when Dorn was nine, he and his parents were sent with a merchant caravan traveling to Yulash; however, their p arty was attacked by a red dragon during the journey.

  • In 1344 DR, when Dorn was nine, he and his parents were sent with a merchant caravan traveling to Yulash; however, their p arty was attacked by a red dragon during the journey.
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In 1344 DR, when Dorn was nine, he and his parents were sent with a merchant caravan traveling to Yulash; however, their party was attacked by a red dragon during the journey.

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