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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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The relationship between Sergen and Darsi was severely damaged following House Veruna being forced to abandon its extensive investments and properties in Hulburg.
  

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The relationship between Sergen and Darsi was severely damaged after House Veruna was forced to abandon its extensive investments and properties in Hulburg.

  • The relationship between Sergen and Darsi was severely damaged after House Veruna was forced to abandon its extensive investments and properties in Hulburg.
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The relationship between Sergen and Darsi was severely damaged after House Veruna was forced to abandon its extensive investments and properties in Hulburg.

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