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Once he learned that Sylora’s plans had been thwarted in Gauntlgrym, the Shadovar tiefling Herzgo Alegni, the commander of the Netherese forces in Neverwinter Wood, reprimanded Barrabus the Grey, his chief assassin, for failing to carry out his orders to kill the Thayan sorceress.
  

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When he learned that Sylora’s plans had been thwarted in Gauntlgrym, the Shadovar tiefling Herzgo Alegni, the commander of the Netherese forces in Neverwinter Wood, reprimanded Barrabus the Grey, his chief assassin, for failing to carry out his orders to kill the Thayan sorceress.

  • When he learned that Sylora’s plans had been thwarted in Gauntlgrym, the Shadovar tiefling Herzgo Alegni, the commander of the Netherese forces in Neverwinter Wood, reprimanded Barrabus the Grey, his chief assassin, for failing to carry out his orders to kill the Thayan sorceress.
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When he learned that Sylora’s plans had been thwarted in Gauntlgrym, the Shadovar tiefling Herzgo Alegni, the commander of the Netherese forces in Neverwinter Wood, reprimanded Barrabus the Grey, his chief assassin, for failing to carry out his orders to kill the Thayan sorceress.

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