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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Seeing the possible death of his love, Silvanoshei threw a broken dragonlance at the Dark Queen, which impaled the goddess and killed her.
  

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Seeing the possible death of his love, Silvanoshei threw a broken dragonlance at the Dark Queen, fatally impaling the goddess.

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Seeing the possible death of his love, Silvanoshei threw a broken dragonlance at the Dark Queen, fatally impaling the goddess.

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