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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Upon arriving in the lands of Vingaard, the imperial forces laid siege to the rebel stronghold of Vingaard Keep, which was a campaign that lasted for several months.
  

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Upon arriving in the lands of Vingaard, the imperial forces laid siege to the rebel stronghold of Vingaard Keep, a campaign that lasted several months.

  • Upon arriving in the lands of Vingaard, the imperial forces laid siege to the rebel stronghold of Vingaard Keep, a campaign that lasted several months.
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Upon arriving in the lands of Vingaard, the imperial forces laid siege to the rebel stronghold of Vingaard Keep, a campaign that lasted several months.

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