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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Aoth was able to convince the Stag King to join his force of stag warriors with the Rashemi berserkers in an assault on the undead’s stronghold, the Fortress of the Half-Demon.
  

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Aoth convinced the Stag King to join his force of stag warriors with the Rashemi berserkers in an assault on the undead stronghold, the Fortress of the Half-Demon.

  • Aoth convinced the Stag King to join his force of stag warriors with the Rashemi berserkers in an assault on the undead stronghold, the Fortress of the Half-Demon.
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Aoth convinced the Stag King to join his force of stag warriors with the Rashemi berserkers in an assault on the undead stronghold, the Fortress of the Half-Demon.

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