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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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While traveling through Illusk’s catacombs, the comrades discovered magical tendrils that originated at the foundation of the ruined Hosttower and then ran in two directions: one to the open sea, and the other inland to the southeast
  

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While traveling through Illusk’s catacombs, the comrades discovered magical tendrils originating at the foundation of the ruined Hosttower and running in two directions: one to the open sea and the other inland to the southeast.

  • While traveling through Illusk’s catacombs, the comrades discovered magical tendrils originating at the foundation of the ruined Hosttower and running in two directions: one to the open sea and the other inland to the southeast.
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While traveling through Illusk’s catacombs, the comrades discovered magical tendrils originating at the foundation of the ruined Hosttower and running in two directions: one to the open sea and the other inland to the southeast.

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