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My first sleep away from my house!

First time I stayed away from my family was, that I was with my grandparents. The experience of that was like a penguin trying to fly. It was like this because each and every time I said I want to go to the toilet or drink water, my granny showed mercy and did what I said. On the other hand, my grandfather was horrible. Hardly I was able to sleep, but unfortunately my grandfather woke me up. Okay I will ask you how he used to do that, any guesses? Hmm…. He was snoring. His snores were like a thunder storm and an earthquake. My uncle and aunt were in a different room. They had a small daughter that was my cousin. She also used to wake me up every moment. Once in that night I went to drink water, then when I was coming back she came and just started to talk in some strange language. I was scared, so I ran into my room, locked the door and took a deep breath. That represented that I was saved, mission accomplished fewwww. I went to the toilet, but when I reached there, it was another person using it. I needed to wait 10 fruitless minutes. Finally when the door was opened I was happy like a poor guy becoming a billionaire. I went in and did I, then I went to bed and slept. It was a day without sunlight. I really couldn’t believe it. Really.

The next day was holy one of my favourite festival it is a Indian festival in which we put colours on each other, and burnt something black. We cooked and ate tasty meals. I was really very exited about it because I hid in a place and whenever someone crosses that place I use colours to put on them. We also used to enjoy holy in school by bringing colours. Then I closed my eyes and tried to think what would I like to do and how will my day pass. Well the test worked. I was bored after some minutes I had nothing to do expect getting bored. In the room there was a TV and my grandparents were sleeping. It was a golden chance I switched on the television and started watching Cartoon Network. My granny woke up and what she saw was me enjoying watching TV. I got scared to sleep there, was there were some dogs crying on the street. I don’t know whether you know the sound of a dog crying or not. I will describe it in a simile. It sounded like a ghostly wolf howling badly in the dark night. They used to do that in midnight so it was so scary that I can describe it even worse than bieber’s voice. I started crying and my grandfather called my father he came and took me. When I reached home crying, I hugged my mom and begged her to not send me there again I was crying and also I started having a stomach ache I was like a broken CD that was still working I had it because I was 4 or 5 years old and also because of the dogs scary crying it was really like the first time I was sleeping away from my house. THE END