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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Is this well-written?

Hi teachers. Is this well-written? (in particular the first part of the second sentence)

The man gets out of his car, opens the trunk, and pulls out a baseball bat. Then, with an evil grin, he jumps over the fence and starts striding toward Ben.

  

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I suggest this. The man gets out of his car, opens the trunk, and pulls out a baseball bat. Then, with an evil grin, he jumps over the fence and strides toward Ben.

— Clive

  • I suggest this.
  • The man gets out of his car, opens the trunk, and pulls out a baseball bat.
  • Then, with an evil grin, he jumps over the fence and strides toward Ben.
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I suggest this.

The man gets out of his car, opens the trunk, and pulls out a baseball bat. Then, with an evil grin, he jumps over the fence and strides toward Ben.

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