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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this well-worded?

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Is this well-worded?

Visit us and quench your thirst with the new chilled drinks – refreshing fruits and ice cocktails, several types of iced coffees, as well as with ice teas!

We’ll wait for you in the hot summer days!

Thanks!
  

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I'm assuming that "fruits and ice cocktails" means cold, fruit-based alcoholic drinks. In the US, "fruit cocktail" means canned fruit in syrup. Perhaps Visit us and quench your thirst with our new chilled drinks -- refreshing fresh-fruit, iced cocktails, several types of iced coffees, as well as various blends of iced tea.

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  • I'm assuming that "fruits and ice cocktails" means cold, fruit-based alcoholic drinks.
  • In the US, "fruit cocktail" means canned fruit in syrup.
  • Perhaps Visit us and quench your thirst with our new chilled drinks -- refreshing fresh-fruit, iced cocktails, several types of iced coffees, as well as various blends of iced tea.
  • We look forward to serving you in the hot summer days.
  • " Leave out "with" with the iced teas to keep the list parallel.
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I'm assuming that "fruits and ice cocktails" means cold, fruit-based alcoholic drinks. In the US, "fruit cocktail" means canned fruit in syrup. Perhaps

Visit us and quench your thirst with our new chilled drinks -- refreshing fresh-fruit, iced cocktails, several types of iced coffees, as well as various blends of iced tea. We look forward to serving you in the hot summer days.

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