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NhanDinh Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

is this understandable and grammatical correct?

My name is Nhan Dinh with the City of Powder Springs. Pam forwarded the e-mail to me about having an ad in the Business Xpansion Journal, August edition. Before making any decisions, we would need to do some research and see if it is cost effective. Hence, would you please airmail to me a sample of the magazine?




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It is perfectly understandable. I'd just tweak it a tiny bit... My name is Nhan Dinh from the City of Powder Springs.

  • It is perfectly understandable.
  • I'd just tweak it a tiny bit...
  • My name is Nhan Dinh from the City of Powder Springs.
  • Pam forwarded your e-mail regarding advertising in the August edition of the Business Xpansion Journal, August edition.
  • Before making a decision, we would need to do some research and see if it is cost effective.
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It is perfectly understandable. I'd just tweak it a tiny bit...

My name is Nhan Dinh from the City of Powder Springs. Pam forwarded your e-mail regarding advertising in the August edition of the Business Xpansion Journal, August edition. Before making a decision, we would need to do some research and see if it is cost effective. Would you please airmail a sample of the magazine to me ?

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