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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is this understandable?
Hi!
Is this understandable?If not, any suggestions how to improve it?
There will be information on the time frame when the required consultations and support will be organized and paid only when Jane and her children, Jim and Nancy, requires such; it is not possible to set any concrete dates and times because that will be possible only after the children will live with Jane in Spain by scheduling visits with specialists.
Thank you!
Is this understandable?If not, any suggestions how to improve it?
There will be information on the time frame when the required consultations and support will be organized and paid only when Jane and her children, Jim and Nancy, requires such; it is not possible to set any concrete dates and times because that will be possible only after the children will live with Jane in Spain by scheduling visits with specialists.
Thank you!
Top answer
This is very hard to understand. You need to rewrite it in shorter and clearer sentences.
- This is very hard to understand.
- You need to rewrite it in shorter and clearer sentences.
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This is very hard to understand. You need to rewrite it in shorter and clearer sentences.
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