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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this understandable?
Hi!
Is this understandable?
Since they seperated, he constantly has threatened – if he won’t get the child, nobody gets him.
Thank you!
Is this understandable?
Since they seperated, he constantly has threatened – if he won’t get the child, nobody gets him.
Thank you!
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A man, who has sep a rated from his wife, has constantly demanded custody of his son and threatened that no one else shall have him. Separated (spelling). Instead of “won’t”, I would use “doesn’t”.
- A man, who has sep a rated from his wife, has constantly demanded custody of his son and threatened that no one else shall have him.
- Separated (spelling).
- Instead of “won’t”, I would use “doesn’t”.
- ” Also, “they” is not defined but left dangling without further reference to “her”.
- Hopefully, other sentences have established from whom he is separated.
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A man, who has separated from his wife, has constantly demanded custody of his son and threatened that no one else shall have him.
Separated (spelling). Instead of “won’t”, I would use “doesn’t”. Instead of, “nobody gets him”, use the matching term, “nobody does!”
Also, “they” is not defined but left dangling without further reference to “her”. Hopefully, other sentences have est
Separated (spelling). Instead of “won’t”, I would use “doesn’t”. Instead of, “nobody gets him”, use the matching term, “nobody does!”
Also, “they” is not defined but left dangling without further reference to “her”. Hopefully, other sentences have est
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