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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Is this understandable?
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We draw your attention to the fact that in case there are registered changes in the information of the entity which is to be included in the registration certificate and the request for the issue of the registration certificate has not been received, the information stated in the previous certificate may not correspond to the information included in the register.
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Would you improve this sentence and how?
We draw your attention to the fact that in case there are registered changes in the information of the entity which is to be included in the registration certificate and the request for the issue of the registration certificate has not been received, the information stated in the previous certificate may not correspond to the information included in the register.
Thank you
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This is very hard to understand. You need to rewrite it in a simpler way. Try using two or more sentences.
- This is very hard to understand.
- You need to rewrite it in a simpler way.
- Try using two or more sentences.
- 'The entity' is a vague term.
- Does it mean eg a person?
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This is very hard to understand. You need to rewrite it in a simpler way. Try using two or more sentences.
'The entity' is a vague term. Does it mean
eg a person?
eg a company?
Are the register and
'The entity' is a vague term. Does it mean
eg a person?
eg a company?
Are the register and
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