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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this understandable?

Hi!

Please take a look at the following sentence. Is it understandable and without mistakes?

The owner shall pay to the administrator a contractual penalty regarding failing to comply with the payment deadline for expenditures arising from maintenance and administration of the property, utilities and other additionally provided services, and the amount of the aforementioned contractual penalty shall be 0,2% of the amount unpaid within the deadline regarding each day’s delay.

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Anonymous penalty regarding failing to comply In place of 'regarding', I would use 'for'. Anonymous services, and the amount of I would suggest a semi-colon after 'services'. Yes, it is understandable.

— Wilpeter

  • Anonymous penalty regarding failing to comply In place of 'regarding', I would use 'for'.
  • Anonymous services, and the amount of I would suggest a semi-colon after 'services'.
  • Yes, it is understandable.
  • Anonymous within the deadline regarding each day’s delay.
  • 2%' rather than the comma within it.
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Anonymouspenalty regarding failing to comply
In place of 'regarding', I would use 'for'.
Anonymousservices, and the amount of
I would suggest a semi-colon after 'services'.
Yes, it is understandable.
Anonymouswithin the deadline regarding each day’s delay.
Again, in place of 'regarding
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