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MelonieG Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this too long of a sentence?

This writing assignment doesn’t ask for perfection, and the finished work would only be shared with the class, so the students could all feel relaxed and have fun with the assignment.

(I'm writing a paper, so I get a little nervous about getting picked apart. Any help would be much appreciated!)
  

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MelonieG This writing assignment doesn’t ask for perfection, and the finished work would only be shared with the class, so the students could all feel relaxed and have fun with the assignment. (I'm writing a paper, so I get a little nervous about getting picked apart. ) If you don't want to get picked apart, boy, are you in the wrong place.

— Enoon

  • MelonieG This writing assignment doesn’t ask for perfection, and the finished work would only be shared with the class, so the students could all feel relaxed and have fun with the assignment.
  • (I'm writing a paper, so I get a little nervous about getting picked apart.
  • ) If you don't want to get picked apart, boy, are you in the wrong place.
  • " No "of".
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MelonieG This writing assignment doesn’t ask for perfection, and the finished work would only be shared with the class, so the students could all feel relaxed and have fun with the assignment. (I'm writing a paper, so I get a little nervous about getting picked apart. Any help would be much appreciated!)
If you don't want to get picked apart, boy, are you in t
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enoonIf you don't want to get picked apart, boy, are you in the wrong place.
I think that enoon was only saying that some of the teachers here do a thorough job of critiquing and nitpicking posters' grammar and composition.. Of course it is better that we do it than your real teacher, no?
Cheers,
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Yes, that's very true. That's why I have come to you - the English Forum folks. This is a wonderful, friendly & helpful community, and I'm glad to be a part of it.

Cheers!
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