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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Is this the topic is correct

hi

I initially structured to study English,so ihave alot of mistakes

i want from you

correct my paragraph about my self

hello

my name is Raghad.i am 18 years old.iam from saudi arabia alive in almadinah.ihave 3 sisters

and iam a youngest child.i am studying(study)in taibah university.thats first years for me

i feel excited about it but also feel scary from it.i must doing hard to pass

i interested in design some stuff.i really like maths .pink is my favorite color.my favorite move are princes caffe and beauty shop.

that set

thanks for help
  

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Sorry, I hit the wrong key, so you may have a partial answer first. First, separate each sentence with a space or two so it is easier to read. Second, start each new sentence with a capital letter and end it with a period (when you are making a simple statement).

  • Sorry, I hit the wrong key, so you may have a partial answer first.
  • First, separate each sentence with a space or two so it is easier to read.
  • Second, start each new sentence with a capital letter and end it with a period (when you are making a simple statement).
  • The names of countries, cities and universities also take a capital letter.
  • " I don't know the movies, so I guessed that it was Princess Cafe (belonging to a royal woman) rather than Prince's Cafe (belonging to a royal man).
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Sorry, I hit the wrong key, so you may have a partial answer first.

First, separate each sentence with a space or two so it is easier to read. Second, start each new sentence with a capital letter and end it with a period (when you are making a simple statement). The names of countries, cities and universities also take a capital letter. "I" is also always capitalized and is separated f
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Now that my wife has proofread my text, here are her corrections:

My name... (I missed the capitalization).
...That's the first year for me. (I missed the end period).
Also, she suggests placing two spaces between sentences, rather than one (per her English teacher).

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