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Lemmyemmy Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Is this the proper punctuation?

Simple lifestyle changes, including brushing, flossing, and a diet change will drastically improve your oral hygiene.

  

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You need another comma after "change". The comma before "and" (so-called "serial comma") is a style choice. Some people choose to include it, while others omit it.

  • You need another comma after "change".
  • The comma before "and" (so-called "serial comma") is a style choice.
  • Some people choose to include it, while others omit it.
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You need another comma after "change".

The comma before "and" (so-called "serial comma") is a style choice. Some people choose to include it, while others omit it.

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