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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this the best way to word this sentence?
Another sojourn from the mainland brought further rewards to Ariakan, when he sailed to the continent of Ithin'carthia and encountered the towering human-like brutes known as the Tarmaks.
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cboutin3 Another sojourn from the mainland brought further rewards to Ariakan, when he sailed to the continent of Ithin'carthia and encountered the towering human-like brutes known as the Tarmaks. I think that the comma after Ariakan is redundant.
- cboutin3 Another sojourn from the mainland brought further rewards to Ariakan, when he sailed to the continent of Ithin'carthia and encountered the towering human-like brutes known as the Tarmaks.
- I think that the comma after Ariakan is redundant.
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cboutin3 Another sojourn from the mainland brought further rewards to Ariakan, when he sailed to the continent of Ithin'carthia and encountered the towering human-like brutes known as the Tarmaks.I think that the comma after Ariakan is redundant.
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