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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this the best way to word the second part of the second sentence? Palin is the young mage.
Upon entering the Tower, Palin and Steel encountered the kender hero Tasslehoff Burrfoot and a beautiful young woman named Usha. Palin and the others then attempted to enter Raistlin’s laboratory, only to have the young mage and Tasslehoff succeed while Steel and Usha were locked out.
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Upon entering the Tower, Palin and Steel encountered the kender hero Tasslehoff Burrfoot and a beautiful young woman named Usha. Palin and the others then attempted to enter Raistlin’s laboratory, only to have the young mage and Tasslehoff succeed while Steel and Usha remained locked out.
- Upon entering the Tower, Palin and Steel encountered the kender hero Tasslehoff Burrfoot and a beautiful young woman named Usha.
- Palin and the others then attempted to enter Raistlin’s laboratory, only to have the young mage and Tasslehoff succeed while Steel and Usha remained locked out.
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Upon entering the Tower, Palin and Steel encountered the kender hero Tasslehoff Burrfoot and a beautiful young woman named Usha. Palin and the others then attempted to enter Raistlin’s laboratory, only to have the young mage and Tasslehoff succeed while Steel and Usha remained locked out.
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