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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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In the final fight against Ondelos and the seventy zombie children who protected him in the Great Fane of the Temple of Hith, Forlo was the only one of fifteen soldiers to survive the clash.
  

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In the final clash with Ondelos and the seventy zombie children who protected him in the Great Fane of the Temple of Hith, Forlo was the only one of fifteen soldiers to survive.

  • In the final clash with Ondelos and the seventy zombie children who protected him in the Great Fane of the Temple of Hith, Forlo was the only one of fifteen soldiers to survive.
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In the final clash with Ondelos and the seventy zombie children who protected him in the Great Fane of the Temple of Hith, Forlo was the only one of fifteen soldiers to survive.

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