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Kouroshh Posted 10 years ago
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I would like to take this opportunity to thank everyone who came yesterday for the demonstration. My special thanks go to Alex and Kia, who worked very hard from the day when they found out about the predicament we were about to fall in. Alex, who wrote a letter to the members of the parliament which the letter was signed by 251 people. Kia, for putting so much effort into organizing demonstration and getting permission from the municipality. More importantly, I would like to appreciate everyone hardworking which led yesterday event happen.
  

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I would like to take this opportunity to thank everyone who came yesterday for the demonstration. My special thanks go to Alex and Kia, who worked very hard from the day when they found out about the predicament we were about to fall into. To Alex, who wrote the letter to members of parliament signed by 251 people.

  • I would like to take this opportunity to thank everyone who came yesterday for the demonstration.
  • My special thanks go to Alex and Kia, who worked very hard from the day when they found out about the predicament we were about to fall into.
  • To Alex, who wrote the letter to members of parliament signed by 251 people.
  • To Kia, for putting so much effort into organizing demonstration and getting permission from the municipality.
  • More importantly, I would like to show my appreciation for everyone's hard work which led to yesterday's successful event.
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I would like to take this opportunity to thank everyone who came yesterday for the demonstration. My special thanks go to Alex and Kia, who worked very hard from the day when they found out about the predicament we were about to fall into. To Alex, who wrote the letter to members of parliament signed by 251 people. To Kia, for putting so much effort into organ

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