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Ionetworld Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this text grammaticaly correct?

"Hey man this is (name), thanks for buying the iPad mini.

Since this is the first time that I use ebay for selling I forgot to send the charger within the iPad package, however I just sent it today as well and it should arrive at the same time as the iPad"
  

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ionetworld Is this text grammaticaly correct? Any utterance that begins with 'Hey man' has abandoned grammatical correctness at the door. Dear (name), Thank you for buying the iPad mini.

  • ionetworld Is this text grammaticaly correct?
  • Any utterance that begins with 'Hey man' has abandoned grammatical correctness at the door.
  • Dear (name), Thank you for buying the iPad mini.
  • This is the first time that I have sold an item on eBay, and I forgot to include the charger in the iPad package.
  • However, I just sent it today under separate cover, and it should arrive at about the same time as your iPad.
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ionetworld Is this text grammaticaly correct?
Any utterance that begins with 'Hey man' has abandoned grammatical correctness at the door.

Dear (name),

Thank you for buying the iPad mini.

This is the first time that I have sold an item on eBay, and I forgot to include the charger in the iPad package. However, I just
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I agree with you, thank you very much for all the corrections.

But grammatically speaking, does it have any mistake?
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ionetworldBut grammatically speaking, does it have any mistake?
Yes, of course. That's why I fixed it for you.

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