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Piano gray 814 Posted 6 years ago
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While project 1 has a higher initial outlay, it has both a shorter payback period and a higher NPV , indicating that this project will generate a higher return and achieve profit in a shorter time than project B. As investing in either projects wont increase the working capital of the firm , the liquidity of the firm wont be affected therefore the firm’s survivability wont be endangered. Hence as the firm can invest in both projects, the firm should invest in project 1 as the investment will result in a larger profit and will achieve profit faster.

  

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This needs a little help. ) I will indicate my suggestions first, then show you the corrected version. ] , [ no space before comma ] indicating that this project will generate a higher return and achieve [ indefinite article ] profit in a shorter time than project B.

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  • This needs a little help.
  • ) I will indicate my suggestions first, then show you the corrected version.
  • ] , [ no space before comma ] indicating that this project will generate a higher return and achieve [ indefinite article ] profit in a shorter time than project B.
  • ] the working capital of the firm , [ no space before comma] the liquidity of the firm wont [ apostrophe after contraction ] be affected [ comma ] therefore the firm’s survivability wont [ apostrophe after contraction ] be endangered.
  • Hence as the firm can invest in both projects, the firm should invest in project 1 as the investment will result in a larger profit and will achieve [ indefinite article ] profit faster.
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This needs a little help. (Also, why project 1 and project B instead or either project 1 and project 2 OR project A and project B?) I will indicate my suggestions first, then show you the corrected version.

While project 1 has a higher initial outlay, it has both a shorter payback period and a higher NPV [is this term understood by the reader?] , [no space before comma] i

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