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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

Is this text good please?

Hello, I wrote a short text in english and I'd like to know if there are faults or mistakes . I want it to sound like an english text and not a translated text.:

Wisdom and peace of mind are the best way to approach life. Self-confidence is the best way to succeed in. Craziness is the best way to enjoy it. Here are the keys of a beautiful life. And fthese keys can only be self-made, by will. Except the last one, you get it by luck.

Can you help me please ?
  

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Here is a more natural rendition: Wisdom and peace of mind are the best tools with which to approach life. Self-confidence is the best tool for success, and w ith craziness is the best way to enjoy it. Here are the keys to a beautiful lif e, and these keys can be made only by oneself, through will power—except for the last o ne, which y ou gain through luck.

— Mister Micawber

  • Here is a more natural rendition: Wisdom and peace of mind are the best tools with which to approach life.
  • Self-confidence is the best tool for success, and w ith craziness is the best way to enjoy it.
  • Here are the keys to a beautiful lif e, and these keys can be made only by oneself, through will power—except for the last o ne, which y ou gain through luck.
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Here is a more natural rendition:

Wisdom and peace of mind are the best tools with which to approach life. Self-confidence is the best tool for success, and with craziness is the best way to enjoy it. Here are the keys to a beautiful life, and these keys can be made only by oneself, through will power—except for the last one, which you gain
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I'm the "anonymous" ^^
Thank you very much !
Have a nice day.Emotion: happy
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Hello, Honeey—and welcome to English Forums.
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