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Next time, please post such material in the Essay-writing Forum. Society's awareness about the environment has grown considerably in recent times. Water quality in particular is pointed to as a major problem to be faced in the coming decades.

— Mister Micawber

  • Next time, please post such material in the Essay-writing Forum.
  • Society's awareness about the environment has grown considerably in recent times.
  • Water quality in particular is pointed to as a major problem to be faced in the coming decades.
  • Industrial water pollution is significant and must be controlled.
  • Petroleum is an essential raw material today , but its processing, in addition to producing gasoline, diesel, lubricants, kerosene, etc, also generates a number of solid, liquid and gas pollutants that must be treated before being released into the environment.
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Next time, please post such material in the Essay-writing Forum.

Society's awareness about the environment has grown considerably in recent times. Water quality in particular is pointed to as a major problem to be faced in the coming decades. Industrial water pollution is significant and must be controlled.

Petroleum is an
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Thank you very much.

One more question: If I had to rephrase the beggining,

'The awareness of Society' instead of 'Society's awareness', would it be wrong? I can't use apostrophes!

Thank you.
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I can't use apostrophes!
You must gird your loins and make the effort.
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