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Katya Suharevskaya Posted 11 years ago
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In the dark.
Many years ago two men went to a very little inn. Their name were John and Tom. It was already very dark when they came. They asked for a room with 2 beds. The inn's owner showed them the room and gave them a candle, because there were no light. Coming into the room, John broke down the candle. It was impossible to see anything. They found the door and came into te room. They took off the clothes and went to bed. The bed was very big and mistakenly two friends went to the same bed: Tm on the one side and Jonh on the other side. After a while John said: "You know Tom, there is a man in my bad. I feel his feet near my neck". "Oh, John, there is a man in my bed too! But he is bigger, his feet near my face!" Answered Tom. "What shall we do?" "Let's push him down!" And they began to push. In a moment, the two big bodies fell down to the floor. "John", cried Tom, "My man is stronger! He pushed me down to the floor!". "I'm on the floor too!", answered John. "I think we shall go and tell about it to the owner!".
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If it is possible - write your corrections!In the dark.
Many years ago two men went to a very little inn. Their name were John and Tom. It was already very dark when they came. They asked for a room with 2 beds. The inn's owner showed them the room and gave them a candle, because there were no light. Coming into the room, John broke down the candle. It was impossible to see anything. They found the door and came into te room. They took off the clothes and went to bed. The bed was very big and mistakenly two friends went to the same bed: Tm on the one side and Jonh on the other side. After a while John said: "You know Tom, there is a man in my bad. I feel his feet near my neck". "Oh, John, there is a man in my bed too! But he is bigger, his feet near my face!" Answered Tom. "What shall we do?" "Let's push him down!" And they began to push. In a moment, the two big bodies fell down to the floor. "John", cried Tom, "My man is stronger! He pushed me down to the floor!". "I'm on the floor too!", answered John. "I think we shall go and tell about it to the owner!".
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In the Dark Two men went to an inn. Their names were John and Tom. It was already very dark when they arrived.
- In the Dark Two men went to an inn.
- Their names were John and Tom.
- It was already very dark when they arrived.
- They asked for a room with two beds.
- The innkeeper showed them a room and gave them a candle because there was no light.
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In the Dark
Two men went to an inn. Their names were John and Tom. It was already very dark when they arrived. They asked for a room with two beds. The innkeeper showed them a room and gave them a candle because there was no light.
Entering the room, John dropped the candle, so it was impossible to see anything. Each took off his clothes and found his bed
Two men went to an inn. Their names were John and Tom. It was already very dark when they arrived. They asked for a room with two beds. The innkeeper showed them a room and gave them a candle because there was no light.
Entering the room, John dropped the candle, so it was impossible to see anything. Each took off his clothes and found his bed
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