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We noticed from Susan that the inspection date for GY678 is on November 08. Please try to advance it to November 06 so as to catch vessel closing November 07 which has requested by October 15. Our customer is running out stock / running low on the storage and requested them urgently. Please help
  

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We heard from Susan that the inspection date for GY678 is on November 8th. Please try to advance it to November 6th so as to catch the vessel closing on November 7th. This was requested on October 15th .

  • We heard from Susan that the inspection date for GY678 is on November 8th.
  • Please try to advance it to November 6th so as to catch the vessel closing on November 7th.
  • This was requested on October 15th .
  • Our customer is running low on / out of stock and has requested this shipment urgently .
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We heard from Susan that the inspection date for GY678 is on November 8th. Please try to advance it to November 6th so as to catch the vessel closing on November 7th. This was requested on October 15th. Our customer is running low on / out of stock and has requested this shipment urgently.

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