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Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

Is this tagline correct?

Strength to defeat the demon
  

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Dear Jenn, As we have no context, it is impossible to know if it is an appropriate tagline, but I can imagine that it could be. It's written in the style of a tagline or title. Kind regards, Michael

— Michael Chambers Teaching English

  • Dear Jenn, As we have no context, it is impossible to know if it is an appropriate tagline, but I can imagine that it could be.
  • It's written in the style of a tagline or title.
  • Kind regards, Michael
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Dear Jenn, As we have no context, it is impossible to know if it is an appropriate tagline, but I can imagine that it could be. It's written in the style of a tagline or title. Kind regards, Michael
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Dear Michael, Thanks for your kind feedback. I can understand you. Please see below for the movie synopsis. And I would like to come out with a tagline for this story. Thanks in advance.

Short Synopsis
A man searches for the courage to lead and finds purpose in passing on his gift to the children of his community.
Long Synopsis
Based on the real-life story of Genesis Potini,
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Dear Jenn,

In my opinion, "defeating the demon" doesn't express the story very well. How about :
"A life of suffering transformed into service" It's just an idea.

Check the grammar of the sentence starting with "Based on...". It needs reworking. There is no main verb.

Kind regards

Michael
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Thank you, Micheal. That's sound better to me. I will consider it.

How about this, "An inspiring true story based on the life of Genesis Potini, a brilliant.."?

Regards,
Gaya
An inspiring true story based on the life of Genesis Potini, a brilliant, New Zealand chess
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