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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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This action accomplished two goals for Tanis, one that he could now direct the Kingpriest, and secondly he would be allowed to study a Portal to the Abyss secretly.
  

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This accomplished two goals for Tanis—he could now direct the Kingpriest, and he would also be allowed to secretly study a Portal to the Abyss.

  • This accomplished two goals for Tanis—he could now direct the Kingpriest, and he would also be allowed to secretly study a Portal to the Abyss.
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This accomplished two goals for Tanis—he could now direct the Kingpriest, and he would also be allowed to secretly study a Portal to the Abyss.

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