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Mehmet Yılmaz Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Is this structured correctly?

In these days, increasing request of dishwashers is caused by increasing importance given in food sector and presented food products in terms of types of increasing workload together. Industrial dishwashers are preferred by many operations such as catering firms, hotels,restaurants, cafe, bars, confectioneries, briefly request of water saving, saving of labour, saving of energy to saving of time and hygienists.
  

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No, it's not. Did you use a machine translator, or something like Google translate? Some of it is understandable and I could rewrite it.

  • No, it's not.
  • Did you use a machine translator, or something like Google translate?
  • Some of it is understandable and I could rewrite it.
  • Some of it is not.
  • I've put the parts that I cannot understand in bold.
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No, it's not.
Did you use a machine translator, or something like Google translate?

Some of it is understandable and I could rewrite it. Some of it is not.

I've put the parts that I cannot understand in bold. Please write these parts in a different way so I can understand them.
Mehmet Yilmaz In these days, increasing request of dishwashers is caused
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Currently, there is an increase in the requests for dishwashers ... Industrial dishwashers are preferred by caterers, hotels, and restaurants because they briefly require less labour and use less water and energy, as well as increased the importance of hygiene.
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No, that's still not right.

I put the ... because I couldn't understand what was supposed to go there.

These dishwashers don't "briefly" require less labour. That means it's temporary and short.

They don't increase the importance of hygiene. Maybe you mean as people put more of an emphasis on the importance of hygiene, they prefer an industrial dishwasher to ensure the
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Yes, Your helping is very near to my point. Thank you

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