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Mehmet Yılmaz Posted 10 years ago
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S2000 is the industrial leader companies in Turkey and its latest done projects in sector at Zorlu Center made an impression in Turkey.
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No. It doesn't read well at all - is S2000 the leading company? S2000 is the industry-leading company in Turkey and its latest completed projects in the sector, at [the] Zorlu Center, made a [strong / positive etc] impression.
- No.
- It doesn't read well at all - is S2000 the leading company?
- S2000 is the industry-leading company in Turkey and its latest completed projects in the sector, at [the] Zorlu Center, made a [strong / positive etc] impression.
- This is not perfect and is only written with the information I can work out from what you've written.
- Without knowing what S2000 and Zorlu Center are, or even which sector of industry they are in, I can't do much better.
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No. It doesn't read well at all - is S2000 the leading company?
S2000 is the industry-leading company in Turkey and its latest completed projects in the sector, at [the] Zorlu Center, made a [strong / positive etc] impression.
This is not perfect and is only written with the information I can work out from what you've written. Without knowing what S2000 and Zorlu Center are,
S2000 is the industry-leading company in Turkey and its latest completed projects in the sector, at [the] Zorlu Center, made a [strong / positive etc] impression.
This is not perfect and is only written with the information I can work out from what you've written. Without knowing what S2000 and Zorlu Center are,
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