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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Over the years, Dorn allied himself with the arctic dwarf ranger Raryn Snowstealer, the halfling scout Will Turnstone, and Pavel Shemov, a human priest of Lathander, to form an elite group of hunters that operated around the Moonsea region
  

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Over the years, Dorn allied himself with the arctic dwarf ranger Raryn Snowstealer, the halfling scout Will Turnstone, and Pavel Shemov, a human priest of Lathander, to form an elite group of hunters foraging in the Moonsea region

  • Over the years, Dorn allied himself with the arctic dwarf ranger Raryn Snowstealer, the halfling scout Will Turnstone, and Pavel Shemov, a human priest of Lathander, to form an elite group of hunters foraging in the Moonsea region
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Over the years, Dorn allied himself with the arctic dwarf ranger Raryn Snowstealer, the halfling scout Will Turnstone, and Pavel Shemov, a human priest of Lathander, to form an elite group of hunters foraging in the Moonsea region

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