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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this structured and worded correctly?

After the crossing, Caramon was able to form an alliance with two different groups: the plainsmen led by the chieftain Darknight, and the hill dwarves led by the thane Reghar Fireforge.
  

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Delete the second comma.

  • Delete the second comma.
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