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Jetson Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is this structure right to use?

Please have an amount of 8900 USD paid by CI corporate for using blah blah ...!
  

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No, it is not clear who is paying whom and when. Who is the receiver? Has the receiver been already paid but CI Corporation?

  • No, it is not clear who is paying whom and when.
  • Who is the receiver?
  • Has the receiver been already paid but CI Corporation?
  • Where's the money now?
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No, it is not clear who is paying whom and when. Who is the receiver? Has the receiver been already paid but CI Corporation? Where's the money now?
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Thank you!
I wanted to mean as following:
The CI corp is indebted an amount of 8900 and I am writing to the C.Bank to make CI corp pay the due debt!
In other words, I am making CI corp through C.Bank to pay the amount, so, here C.Bank acts as a pressure factor on CI corp to pay the due amount. I am writing to C.Bank to make CI corp to pay the due.
Am I right?

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