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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this sound correct or should I change the "however" to "but"?

The emperor wished his Wolves could have been in Daltigoth for this incident; however, they had left the night before with a large entourage of priests and courtiers to complete a secret mission.
  

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Punctuation is tricky, and highly controversial. I would keep it as it is. Using but would require only a comma rather than a semi-colon.

  • Punctuation is tricky, and highly controversial.
  • I would keep it as it is.
  • Using but would require only a comma rather than a semi-colon.
  • Your sentence is long, so the semi-colon is better.
  • [ There are several respected people here who don't approve of semi-colons.
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Punctuation is tricky, and highly controversial. I would keep it as it is. Using but would require only a comma rather than a semi-colon. Your sentence is long, so the semi-colon is better. [ There are several respected people here who don't approve of semi-colons. ]

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