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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Is this song lyric grammatically correct?

Hello!
I am wondering if the line "just a time in life worth leaving" is reasonably correct. I am writing it as song lyrics, which aren't always grammatically correct. However, I still fear that this line won't make sense to listeners. Does it sound alright to you?
  

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It is grammatically correct. To me it sounds like a wordplay on "worth living". I'm not sure whether that is the intention.

— GPY

  • It is grammatically correct.
  • To me it sounds like a wordplay on "worth living".
  • I'm not sure whether that is the intention.
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It is grammatically correct. To me it sounds like a wordplay on "worth living". I'm not sure whether that is the intention.
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GPYIt is grammatically correct. To me it sounds like a wordplay on "worth living". I'm not sure whether that is the intention.
Thank you so much for your input! I'm writing a song about two people who were once in love with each other but realize that the love affair was worth ending. The full lyrics go, "We'll forever be strangers with a time in life worth le
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AnonymousThank you so much for your input! I'm writing a song about two people who were once in love with each other but realize that the love affair was worth ending. The full lyrics go, "We'll forever be strangers with a time in life worth leaving." Do you think it would make sense to listeners?
No. The concept of a love affair being "worth ending" seems odd
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GPY AnonymousThank you so much for your input! I'm writing a song about two people who were once in love with each other but realize that the love affair was worth ending. The full lyrics go, "We'll forever be strangers with a time in life worth leaving." Do you think it would make sense to listeners?No. The concept of a love affair being "worth ending" seems odd too. The
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I'm not completely certain what you want to say. Do you mean something like "It was good while it lasted, but now it's over"?
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GPYI'm not completely certain what you want to say. Do you mean something like "It was good while it lasted, but now it's over"?
Yes! Something with that concept in mind. Really appreciate the help! I'm in line at Subway at the moment. Do you know if the Turkey Italiano Sandwich is pretty good?
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