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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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We noticed that two of the lamp shades we received are slightly damaged; the fabric lamp shades look loose and sagging, and dents

  

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anonymous We noticed that two of the lamp shades we received are slightly damaged; the fabric lamp shades look loose and sagging, and dents Too long. Two lamp shades are slightly damaged: the fabric is dented, loose and sagging.

  • anonymous We noticed that two of the lamp shades we received are slightly damaged; the fabric lamp shades look loose and sagging, and dents Too long.
  • Two lamp shades are slightly damaged: the fabric is dented, loose and sagging.
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anonymousWe noticed that two of the lamp shades we received are slightly damaged; the fabric lamp shades look loose and sagging, and dents

Too long.

Two lamp shades are slightly damaged: the fabric is dented, loose and sagging.

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