Is this small passage worded properly?

As they were journeying through the woods, they were shadowed and often attacked by a pack of magically-controlled lions. While the band was encamped that night, they were assaulted by the lions, and the leader of the pack, a gigantic lion with a mane of blue fire, attempted to abduct Stedd. Anton and Umara managed to stop the monstrous lion from escaping with Stedd, and the young Chosen was able to then use his powers to heal the beast of the magical flame.