Is this small passage worded correctly?

Shortly after the battle in Neverwinter, Drizzt, Dahlia, and Entreri decided to travel to Gauntlgrym, since the primordial was their best chance to destroy Charon’s Claw. The trio was attacked by a group of Shadovar while they were journeying to the ancient dwarven city, but they defeated them. When the companions entered the tunnels that led to Gauntlgrym, the Shifter approached Drizzt and offered to give him back Guenhwyvar in exchange for Charon’s Claw, but the ranger refused, earning him Entreri’s trust.