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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this small passage worded and structured in the best way?
Kymas hastily took the boy prophet to the Thayan ship, which he immediately ordered to set sail from the city. When Anton and Umara reached Westgate’s habor, they discovered that the Thayan vessel had departed without them. Knowing that the church of Amaunator, the Umberlants, and others were seeking them, the two comrades made their way to the gnome smuggler Falrinn Greatorm’s ship, which was the vessel that Anton had arranged to carry him from the city.
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Thanks for your help. I revised the sentence so how is the new version? When Anton and Umara reached Westgate’s habor, they discovered that the Thayan vessel had departed without them. Knowing that the church of Amaunator, the Umberlants, and others were seeking them, the two comrades quickly departed from the city on the gnome smuggler Falrinn Greatorm’s ship in pursuit of the Thayan vessel.
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