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FYI- Tasslehoff is the kender. Tasslehoff and Fizban returned to the chamber where the kender’s companions slumbered, and where Silvara seemed torn by a terrible conundrum. Fizban sternly ordered Silvara to release the spell and to tell the group the truth. Reluctantly, Silvara revealed her true identity as a silver dragon named D'argent, who was sister to the same silver dragon who had been beloved by Huma.