Is this small paragrpah worded in the proper way?

The Spider Queen wanted the dark elves to wage war against the peoples of the Silver Marches in order to widen her realm of influence to the sphere of the arcane, as well as wound Drizzt and by extension, Mielikki. Quenthel later spoke with Saribel Xorlarrin, Zeerith’s second daughter and a minor priestess of Lolth, and instructed her to hastily travel to Menzoberranzan with Tiago when he returned to Gauntlgrym. Before Quenthel left the Xorlarrin settlement, she told Berellip that the chamber that housed the primordial of fire, which powered the forges of Gauntlgrym, would serve as the chapel of Q'Xorlarrin.