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In Luskan, Jarlaxle learned about Entreri and his comrades from Beniago Baenre, a lieutenant of Bregan D'aerthe who was always magically disguised as a human because he served as the High Captain of Ship Kurth. Later that day, Beniago was visited by Quenthel, and after she beat and then made love to the disguised drow, she instructed him to assume complete control of the dark elves’ interests in Luskan. Jarlaxle was planning to journey to Port Llast to find Entreri’s band, but Quenthel and Gromph soon arrived at his headquarters in Luskan and ordered him and his forces to return to Menzoberranzan