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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentences written correctly (Thank you in advance)
In order to pay my expenses, I am currently working in the hotel but it is interesting to know that I am using the knowledge I gained from my chemistry education in my daily working. It is important in my job to get rid of hair (protein), fat and limescale (mostly carbonate calcium). So, by having a knowledge about which chemical exactly should be used, I have enhanced the quality of my job and thrilled my college and the guests who are coming to our hotel.
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Clever paragraph! I suggest these edits. In order to pay my expenses, I am currently working in a hotel.
- Clever paragraph!
- I suggest these edits.
- In order to pay my expenses, I am currently working in a hotel.
- I have found a way to use in my daily tasks the knowledge I gained from my chemistry education.
- It is important in my job to get rid of hair (protein), fat and limescale (mostly carbonate calcium).
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Clever paragraph!
I suggest these edits.
In order to pay my expenses, I am currently working in a hotel. I have found a way to use in my daily tasks the knowledge I gained from my chemistry education. It is important in my job to get rid of hair (protein), fat and limescale (mostl
I suggest these edits.
In order to pay my expenses, I am currently working in a hotel. I have found a way to use in my daily tasks the knowledge I gained from my chemistry education. It is important in my job to get rid of hair (protein), fat and limescale (mostl
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