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Kouroshh Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentences written correctly? Thank you in advance!

I am very Interested for doing chemistry job related subjects. I am a very hard working, and self-motivating person. I wish my work experience hopefully makes me an appropriate candidate for you job position. In addition, I have started to learn Polish from November 2012. I assure you that I will try my best to be able to understand and speak Polish as quickly as possible. In addition, I was granted visa and authorized to live and work in Poland from 23rd October 2012 for 2 years.

Furthermore, I do not mind to work in restaurant or hotel like doing cleaning, washing, cooking and serving the foods. Since I do not know Polish very well I need some time to communicate and speak with people. I believe working in restaurant and hotel could help me to improve my language besides helping with cleaning and cooking.
  

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Are these sentences written correctly? I am very Interested in doing jobs related to chemistry.. I am a very hard working , (no comma) and self-motivating person.

  • Are these sentences written correctly?
  • I am very Interested in doing jobs related to chemistry..
  • I am a very hard working , (no comma) and self-motivating person.
  • I wish my work experience hopefully makes me an appropriate candidate for you r job position.
  • This is correct grammar, but you are saying that your work experience does not really suit the position, only that you wish it did.
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Are these sentences written correctly?

I am very Interested in doing jobs related to chemistry..
I am a very hard working, (no comma) and self-motivating person.
I wish my work experience hopefully makes me an appropriate candidate for your job position. This is correct grammar, but you are saying that your work experience does not
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I really appreciate your help dear Alphecca. About your first question I did not mean to say my work experience does not suit the position on the contrary I wanted to say it completely suits. Could you please help me that how to formulate this sentence to say that I believe that I am the right person for this position?

About your second question I meant what exactly you explained.
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Here is what you need:


I know that my work experience makes me a good candidate for this position.

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You will find that my work experience makes me a good candidate for this position.

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