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Kouroshh Posted 13 years ago
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Is this sentences written correctly? Should I add something extra ( Thank you in advance)

I hope you can give me an opportunity to work in your reputable company as a summer intern and I will assure you that I will put in 100 % of my effort for my job. I am quite confident that I will be able to complete your project successfully.
  

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kouroshh I hope you can give me an opportunity to work in your reputable company as a summer intern and I will assure you that I will put in 100 % of my effort for my job. I am quite confident that I will be able to complete your project successfully. My version would be this: I hope you can give me an opportunity to work at your company as a summer intern.

— CalifJim

  • kouroshh I hope you can give me an opportunity to work in your reputable company as a summer intern and I will assure you that I will put in 100 % of my effort for my job.
  • I am quite confident that I will be able to complete your project successfully.
  • My version would be this: I hope you can give me an opportunity to work at your company as a summer intern.
  • You can be assured that I will apply 100% of my effort to the job and that I will complete your project successfully.
  • ] CJ
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kouroshh I hope you can give me an opportunity to work in your reputable company as a summer intern and I will assure you that I will put in 100 % of my effort for my job. I am quite confident that I will be able to complete your project successfully.
My version would be this:

I hope you can give me an opportunity to work at your company as a summer i
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