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Kouroshh Posted 13 years ago
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Is this sentences written correctly (I greatly appreciate your help)

Alex, I would like to kindly ask you that do you know aunt Kay is in US? I would like to speak with her about something very important. I would really appreciate it if you could provide me her number if she is staying there.
  

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I would like to speak with her about something very important. I would really appreciate it if you could provide me with her number, if she is there. Don't use 'kindly' like you did.

  • I would like to speak with her about something very important.
  • I would really appreciate it if you could provide me with her number, if she is there.
  • Don't use 'kindly' like you did.
  • Basically, the kindness is not in your asking, it will be in his answering.
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Alex, I would like to ask you if aunt Kay is in thee US.I would like to speak with her about something very important. I would really appreciate it if you could provide me with her number, if she is there.

Don't use 'kindly' like you did. Basically, the kindness is not in your asking, it will be in his answering.
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Thank you so much. You are completely right. I do not know why I am using kindly a lot. I should definitely take into consideration your suggestion.

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