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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Ariakas named the dark cleric Verminaard as the new Dragon Highlord of the Red Dragonarmy, and recruited vast amounts of soldiers for the five forces, as well established new supply lines and assigned specialized troops.
  

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cboutin3 Ariakas named the dark cleric Verminaard as the new Dragon Highlord of the Red Dragonarmy . He also recruited vast amounts numbers of soldiers for the five forces, as well besides establish ing new supply lines and assign ing specialized troops. With the long sentence structures come various problems in verb forms.

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  • cboutin3 Ariakas named the dark cleric Verminaard as the new Dragon Highlord of the Red Dragonarmy .
  • He also recruited vast amounts numbers of soldiers for the five forces, as well besides establish ing new supply lines and assign ing specialized troops.
  • With the long sentence structures come various problems in verb forms.
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cboutin3 Ariakas named the dark cleric Verminaard as the new Dragon Highlord of the Red Dragonarmy. He also recruited vast amounts numbers of soldiers for the five forces, as well besides
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Thanks for all your help. How is this revision: Ariakas named the dark cleric Verminaard as the new Dragon Highlord of the Red Dragonarmy, and also recruited vast numbers of soldiers, established new supply lines, and assigned specialized troops to the five forces.
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